Dog and the new teddy

WALT - write a story about a given image

SUCCESS CRITERIA -

• Use an interesting starting sentence.
• Use 3 or more complex sentences. (Yellow)
• Use expensive words (Green)
• Use adjectives and adverbs (Red)

It was christmas time Roxy the dog lived in a family that loved him very much. On christmas there was one present that he adored most of all. And that was a pink and white stuffed bear.

He kept it for many years as it got older it began to lose colour. One day the stuffed bear got ripped. Straight down the middle. Roxy was heartbroken.

The owners heard Roxy yelping and saw her staring at the stuffed bear. Roxy and her owners went on a long walk tring to find the special  stuffed bear that had been with him for most of his life.

Then in the window was the stuffed bear that he had loved. But it was brand new the colour was there it was clean. They bought it for Roxy.

Then when she got home she rushed in excitement and leaped onto the couch and stayed cuddling it all night. And loved it for longer than her first one. And the owners did not have to buy her one ever again.